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Website content review
Three stages of the same material, from raw crawl to finished site. Each one is a complete, browsable snapshot — open them in order to see what was kept, cut and rewritten at each step.
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Stage 1
Raw content extract
Every unique page pulled off the old site, stripped of navigation and templating but otherwise untouched — original wording, original WordPress markup, 23 pages and 34 images. This is the source material everything else was cut down from.
23 pages · 34 images · original copy, unedited
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Stage 2
Consolidated draft
The same material reorganised into a coherent structure — 23 crawled pages down to 11 — and rewritten into past tense as a company archive. Plain HTML with minimal styling, so the focus stays on what the words say rather than how the page looks.
11 pages · unstyled · history split across 8 sub-pages
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Stage 3
Release candidate
current proposalThe finished site. Editorial notes removed, the deprecated home-monitoring product framed firmly in the past, and the eight history pages folded into one scrollable page with the images actually placed. Three pages in total.
3 pages · designed · this is the one to give feedback on
A couple of things worth knowing while you review:
- Stage 1 is a crawl artefact: a few of its in-page links point at old WordPress permalinks that were not carried into the extract, so they will not resolve.
- All three stages describe the home-monitoring platform in the past tense; nothing here announces the new direction beyond a placeholder.